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Re: 7-27-09 I Am...
Hi there anime-girl13. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. It really shows you opening up and talking about the kind ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Time
Hi Auna! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today! So, I am really digging this poem. I like what you're trying to say here, about how we ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Scream
Hi there love-death-poems. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, you hit us with a lot of bad things like, one right after the other, in ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Last Storm
Hi there, captain.classy. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really think that you need to follow the old "Show, don't tell" adage here. You're ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: the Great
Hi there, Gal. I've stopped by to give this a review, as you asked. So, I rather like this poem. What draws me in is all the archaic references that ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Entry #2 for Hannah's Contest
The painting behind this was "The Mermaid" by John William Waterhouse She combed her hair with a wistful glance as the waves came in around where she lay. She looked ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: A Night in December
Hi there dawgsnlocust! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today! So, I liked this conversation style poetry you decided to experiment with. I don't think I've ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Her Beauty
Hi there a_kittens_claws! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I liked this poem. It was refreshing to hear a view such as the one ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Linguists
Hi Via! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really liked this poem. Your use of alliteration was rather well done, in my opinion, and was ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: -shire
Hi Demeter! I'm Conrad, and I'm gonna be your reviewer today. So, I really liked this poem. While I don't care much for the balls and fancy stuff in stories, ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Ouraul Pt. 2
The alien paused, and his face turned in an expression of disgust. He began to wipe his boots off on the floor, in an attempt to clean them of the ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Cat Steps [2]
Hi Rosey! I'm getting around to this sooner than I did part two! :P So, I think this part is much better than the first one. I was better able ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Shay's Blu (Prologue)
Hi there Forever. I'm Conrad Rice, and I shall be your reviewer for today. So, it looks to me like there are some minor grammar and spelling errors scattered throughout ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Ouraul Pt. 1
The Antigone hung in the atmosphere of the gas giant. Its long boxy form loomed between the purple clouds of nitrogen gas, providing an imposing sight to the crew of ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Entry #1 for Hannah's Contest
*This short piece was inspired by the painting "The Dead Poet Borne By A Centaur" by Gustave Moreau* It was a sad sunny day. For a day as sad as ...
Jan 2, 2010
